Dan, you are so mean!
To take a fun by-product like Susan's cool hair and to turn it into a depressing, traumatic flashback is just plain cruelty!
... But (sigh) I have to admit, after the initial shock, that it is excellent story-telling.
You're still mean for making me sad, though. (lol)
After her evening as a male, she's probably going to have to re-process her memory.
That will probably be quite painful.
I wonder whether Susan will ever come to terms with her father's betrayal well enough that he stops being "faceless."
Not sure where this is going with Susan transposing her own face onto TOW. I hope we're not suddenly going all Freudian.
I like the dropped box morphing into the dropped book.
And the filler is great! ROTFL!!! The perfect choice for Susan!!!