That was fine. However... unless you can become intangible at will, you shouldn't be able to move through the man. He or rather 'It' is a being of primal power that exists to hunt and slay. It's focus relates to powerful things, meaning since you guys are more powerful than normal humans, it goes after you. It's also being semi-controlled by someone else, and therefore WILL go after you first. And if you jumped at it it would fight you - it wouldn't bother playing intangible, it'd just fight.
So, like I said, unless you can become intangible at will, we have a problem with your last post.
"... if it had to perish twice,
I think I know enough of hate
To say that for Destruction Ice is also great
And would suffice."
- Robert Frost