If you're looking for answers, you might want to stop with the overly-poetic, stating-the-obvious stuff like that thing above. You'll only confuse yourself if you try to simultaneously ponder the mysteries of the universe/soul and articulate your findings. More likely you'll confuse someone else with arrangements of words that might seem right at the time, but remember that everybody else is not you - we haven't been through the same thought processes you have to arrive at a conclusion, therefore some information you may have taken for granted when writing might have been left out of the final product. Also try to remember that not everything is linear. Not everything simply goes from one thing to the next, in fact its all a big mess to be honest. - Hey, I'm not bitching here, just hoping to add some constructive criticism...
One final thought kids, I don't think we are all the same deep down. I think we're horribly, horribly different. And just the fact that I think that and Mono doesn't proves this, doesn't it?